Insomnia's Moonlight Sonata, New Painting by me.  This is an original smudge painting, from scratch (not from a  photo, but drawn and painted by hand.)In Murky Waters[1]
Already her pink toes disappear into the small shadowed pond 
That serves as a gateway to the underworld.  The sun sets 
Due west, relentless, as she plunges deep into clouded 
Waters, swims strong, and surfaces
In another world.  It’s not what you’d expect, dark
Damp rock, stalactites and stalagmites, clusters of bats,
Dangling spiders.  Here, dark things coexist with an improbable 
Profusion of sunshine:  dunes, jungles, mountains, waterfalls, 
Fecund green swamps.  Anything found in the above-world exists 
Below.  That first time, Persephone saw only darkness,
The fire-lit throne room, the endless files of dead 
Passing through, the grey river Styx and the huge grey swamps 
Through which it flows.  Hades had to teach her.  She opened 
Her eyes to find other eyelids underneath.  Hades, who spoke at length
About the “veils,” peeled away onion layers of Persephone’s eyes
Until a pale yellow-green light began to suffuse the endless 
Night.  Layer upon layer he scraped away, until Persephone herself
Began clawing the masks of blindness from her eyes, 
Like Dante, tearing off his masks.  After months 
Of thinning, the sun appeared within rock and beyond rock.  
“Ah, sweet sun,” She said to Demeter, one spring evening, pointing 
Down through stone into her husband’s chambers.  Demeter imagined
Her daughter weak from lack of sustenance, from drinking
Only grenadine for half the year.  At first, Persephone swore she would rewrite 
Her own myth:  escape from Hades and return to the flowering earth.
Now, rewriting again, she sees herself as uniquely privileged, golden 
Fish in murky waters, the powerful, winged and shining
Queen of the underworld.
[1] Published in New Millennium; $500 1st place prize
5 comments:
Love the painting and the powerful words.
Thanks, John! :-D :-D
Mary, what a magic story! So sorry to hear you are ill.
I love that poem!
Thanks so much LDahl and jo(e)!! :-D
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