I have stuff between chapter 4 and this chapter, but it isn't organized yet, so if you don't want a "spoiler," because it skips ahead don't read this. It's also full of first draft errors.
Chapter 7?: Angel’s Berretta and the Melodrama of
the Year
Fred
Wheeler, the greenhouse guru, had invited the mycology TAs up to the Mycology
Greenhouse on top of Illick to view his current edible and poisonous mushroom
collection, which he kept, both in conjunction with the mycology professors, and
for himself. Because the TAs had different personal and academic schedules, he
did not request or expect them to all show up at once.
Rune
decided to go up after class, and with a whisper, asked Cassie if she wanted to
go, too. She nodded, and as they
left class, they found themselves in a group with most of the TA’s: Bart,
Peter, Angel, Carter and Scott.
Jody appeared from somewhere and tagged along.
Fred
smiled and stood up from his desk in his workroom to welcome them. He always seemed eager for company, yet
somehow shy. Rune had made friends
with him as an undergraduate, first because she’d loved hanging out in the
greenhouses and would go there to look around, read, study, write, and take
pictures. In her senior year, she
took a one-credit course in plant propagation that Fred Wheeler taught. They had become closer then, but
although Fred was friendly and eager, he was also shy to the point of
reticence. He spoke quietly, with
a lisp similar to Larry’s. He kept
his head down and rarely looked any of them in the eye. But he showed them his
cellar, which seemed odd on the rood of Illick, and his mushrooms that grew in
shade and sunshine. He told them
which ones could be used for labs for McHaggerty's class and which belonged to
Dr. Wang or (other professors [return to this]) and which were his and could be
used for student research. He
showed them "cellar" rooms and empty greenhouses rooms that the grad
students could use for their research.
And at the end, he gave them each a small sample of parasol mushroom, one
of the wild mushrooms that could be eaten raw, and a bag of shiitakes from his
half-rotted shiitake log.
Rune
offered to cook the mushrooms and make a stir-fry at the girl's apartment, if
everyone was up for it, and they all headed down through Oakwood cemetery to
Colvin and down Colvin to the girls apartment.
They
went in talking and laughing and were assaulted by the strong smell of fried
mushrooms. Rune set down her
backpack and got out the wok.
Cassie went in the living room to put on some music and the boys busied
themselves punching each other in the shoulder and calling each other
inappropriate and non-PC names.
The
cutting board was already out, Rune noticed, and a paring knife and a Teflon
frying pan pushed to the back burner.
The butter dish was open on the counter. Someone had obviously already been frying mushroom. Had to
be Eliza, Ellen or Bella. Rune
looked in the compost bin. There
were shaggy mane stems, bits of black shaggy mane edges, grass and dirt and
other mushroom bits that looked too white. She didn't think much about it, but something was niggling
at her.
"They
never grow up," Angel said, referring to Bart, Peter, Scott and Carter who
were roughhousing in the part of the kitchen closest to the hallway to
bedrooms. She shifted around from
foot to foot, looking embarrassed.
Rune supposed it because of the fight they’d had and the way Angel had
stormed out. There was a lull in
the noise and Rune heard the sound of squeaking springs coming from Eliza's
room.
For
a moment, Rune thought nothing of the sex sounds; they were common enough for
Eliza and Peter. But Peter was
here in the kitchen. Startled, she
glanced at him, and wished she hadn't.
He looked stricken. He
stood in an awkward posture from the rough-housing like a victim of freeze tag
waiting to be freed by a touch, his head twisted toward the hall and tilted in
a clichéd listening posture.
Suddenly,
he turned and flew down the hall.
Rune, without thinking, took off after him, rounding the corner in time
to see Peter lift his foot and with a mighty kick and a loud sound of rending
wood, bash down the door to Eliza's room.
Eliza shrieked.
Rune
was at the door in time to see Peter kick at naked man who humping Eliza. The man rolled to the side and off the
bed and Eliza lay for a moment in the center of the bed, as if stunned, with
her legs splayed open.
Peter screamed, “You whore. I thought you loved me! He grabbed her by the shoulders and
shook her, then flew at the man cringing behind the bed attempting to cover
himself with a sheet that was still tucked into the bed at the bottom.
In
horror, Rune realized the man was McHaggerty. She thought, somewhat incongruously, that he was not nearly
as handsome naked as he was clothed.
His skin did not have the taut smoothness of the boys--young men--Rune’s
age, but sagged slightly, and wrinkled oddly. He had a belly, a bit of a bear
gut, and lines on his hips from his pants. Unlike the golden tan on his face, the skin on his chest was
pale and sickly looking.
Out
of the corner of her eye, Rune saw Jody standing in the doorway looking shocked
and drawn.
Peter
grabbed McHaggerty by the hair, hauled him up a few feet off the floor, and
punched him.
Simultaneously,
someone else was shrieking.
Angel
whipped a Berretta 25 (?) out of her pocket, and holding it in both hands--Rune
thought oddly of a TV detective program--and aimed it at McHaggerty.
"You
lying philandering asshole!” she shouted.
“Get out of the way, Peter!"
Rune,
without thinking, brought her arm up under Angel’s arms, and the gun fired into
the window behind McHaggerty, shattering the glass. Bart tackled Angel, knocking her to the floor, but Angel had
a death-grip on the gun and aimed again. Peter yanked McHaggerty to the side
and the bullet entered the wall right where McHaggerty's head had been. Rune kicked with all her strength at
the gun, knocking it out of Angel's hands. Bart and Angel rolled for the gun, but Bart got there a
millisecond before her.
Angel
leaped away, jumping up onto the bed where Eliza had managed to wrap a blanket
around herself. She kicked Eliza
hard, and continued over the bed onto the floor where she attacked McHaggerty
with her nails and teeth, drawing long bleeding welts on his cheeks and chest.
"You
liar! You asshole! you son of bitch! I hope you burn in Hell!” she screamed,
her voice ragged and raw and at such a high volume that is was hard to make out
the words. Bart handed the gun to
Carter, and told him to get it out of the room to safety. Then he and Scott grabbed Angel’s
flailing arms and pulled her away from the still naked McHaggerty.
Peter
stood shaking, looking with fury at McHaggerty. In a low voice, he said, "I'd kill you myself, but you
are not worth the effort. You are
the filthiest scum of the scum."
He
turned and strode from the room.
Rune
noticed a bottle of wine on the bedside table with two glasses. Eliza was under age and always made a
point not to drink. How had he
talked her into it? Were there any
date-rape drugs involved? Rune
knew nothing about date-rape drugs.
But this whole scenario was too strange. Eliza, who was always faithful to Peter, Eliza who never
drank, had been drinking and screwing McHaggerty.
Rune
looked at McHaggerty. He held his
pants up in front of his genitals and looked mortified, appalled and frightened. It occurred to her they should all
leave, and she grabbed at the boys who were still holding a shrieking Angel and
tilted her head toward the door.
Bart and Scott dragged Angel from the room and Rune tried to pull shut the
door.
2 comments:
Wow,action packed and gripping! I like it.
Oh good, I was afraid you might be offended.
I've worked on it a little more, though I am TRYING to do the NaNoWriMo thing and move FORWARD (to come back later.)
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